Xenia, a fugitive with 15,000 gold on her head for conspiracy against the Crown, has evaded capture for five years. She's done her best to evade trouble, but she can't escape her dark past forever.
Please give me any constructive criticism you can think of as well as comments on strengths you notice. I hope to be a published author one day, so I want this book and all of my books to become awesome and as close to perfect as is humanly possible.
(And yes, I fail at drawing xD Just want a cover)
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thank you so much for submitting to my contest! I very much enjoyed this read!!!
unfortunately I can only have one winner so.....
thanks for entering!!!
Keep up the fabulous work!
-Dragon
Go to Bing.com look under fantasy and find a world of art. Put what you like on your computer by copy paste. When you want to have a picture for your books, you have one. That's where this picture came from I use for me. She sits contemplating. That's me and the way I see myself. I used others for my book covers on this site. Hope it helps.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Good idea! Another one I'm contemplating is using one of the less modern looking Bitstrips to make t.. read moreGood idea! Another one I'm contemplating is using one of the less modern looking Bitstrips to make temporary covers
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Okay, you lost me. What's a Bitstrip???
10 Years Ago
it's a type of comic made by a Facebook and mobile app called Bitstrips
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Thank you for explaining. How do I check it out?
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go to play store, whatever iPhones equivalent is, or Facebook and search Bitstrips. I made my charac.. read morego to play store, whatever iPhones equivalent is, or Facebook and search Bitstrips. I made my characters Facebooks when bored one day haha
enjoy! You know what else WC does that is extremely annoying? Doesn't have a previous chapter and/or.. read moreenjoy! You know what else WC does that is extremely annoying? Doesn't have a previous chapter and/or next chapter link in some of my chapters. For example, in Democracy's End (set five years before this book) chapter two is missing the next chapter link. In Fallen Ones, which starts three months before this with the murder and ends just before this starts, there are several missing links. This one is missing the next link in chapter two leading to chapter three.
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Oh good lord! Posting...Title: Name of book, Chapter number, and a title of that chapter if you wis.. read moreOh good lord! Posting...Title: Name of book, Chapter number, and a title of that chapter if you wish. All of it on the same Title section. then if they loose it you can find it. I will copy paste this comment of yours so I can find your chapters. In the meantime go into editing and fix the Title section making sure the book section is correct. It's easier if the chapters are together...or...did they loose the writing all together?
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They show the chapter list on the right side of the page underneath the rating and tag box and above.. read moreThey show the chapter list on the right side of the page underneath the rating and tag box and above the summary but most people don't look there. I didn't even know the previous and next links were missing until one of my " Democracy's End" readers saw and pointed it out! Usually at the bottom of the chapter list above reviews they show my previous and next links
My name is Cher Armstrong, also known as Speedy Hobbit. I'm a USATF athlete in racewalking for the Raleigh Walkers club team.
I just graduated from Queens College in Queens borough in New York Ci.. more..