Kiran, wrongly accused of murdering Dremeadow's queen, has safely returned home with 200 hobbit refugees and thinks all's well- until the disgraced prince of Dremeadow and his friend vanish.
Please give me any constructive criticism you can think of as well as comments on strengths you notice. I hope to be a published author one day, so I want this book and all of my books to become awesome and as close to perfect as is humanly possible.
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I hope you are able to have your dream come true with having your books and stories published. I was not able to read the entire thing yet, but I will and I will leave a comment on each chapter. Always remember, don't give up! Dreams don't have an expiration date. If you ever need help or get stuck with writers block, hit me up and I will bounce ideas around with you. xo Winter
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much. I cannot possibly put to words how much I appreciate this.
I hope you are able to have your dream come true with having your books and stories published. I was not able to read the entire thing yet, but I will and I will leave a comment on each chapter. Always remember, don't give up! Dreams don't have an expiration date. If you ever need help or get stuck with writers block, hit me up and I will bounce ideas around with you. xo Winter
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so very much. I cannot possibly put to words how much I appreciate this.
My name is Cher Armstrong, also known as Speedy Hobbit. I'm a USATF athlete in racewalking for the Raleigh Walkers club team.
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