Over and Over

Another poem by speechless

I have been broken

I have been repaired

Over and over again

I stand alone

I stand protected

Confusion still dominates

I fall apart

And am never put back together

I wish it would all just end

But it just keeps happening

Over and over again

it will never end.

Author's Note

How do you like it? Please review and tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Terra]

I. Love. It. Well, mostly.. The last line is a bit flismy for me, but it's still amazing!

[Sharkapillar]

A sad write. Very emotional, yet prettily worded and flowing nicely.
Good job.

Blessed be,
Rabbit

[R E Tree]

Many people can relate to this. I like how you have wrote this poem so simply to the reader. It makes the reader understand this in a simple way because there is no complicated metaphors or symbolism that can make the reader think the wrongly about the poem. Great job

[Tahna]

I like it good :)
Nice write, nice words

[Misled Legend]

I can understand and praise this poem since I have experienced this a few times. Keep up the good work Speechless!

[A.Lee]

Very true. I sense a lot of emotion packed neatly into a short poem. Nicely done.

[deeps]

Such a powerful little write here that is full of emotion.
I found this very well written and full of sadness.