Book IV

Part 4 of Speechless

Invisibility dominated her life

The bell rang and everyone left

Everyone except her

She wanted to make certain

She picked up her books and walked past the teacher

In the emptying hallways

The students neither turned towards her

Nor did they acknowledge her existence.

Why was that?

Is it because they didn't like her?

Maybe it was because they didn't think

That she knew they were there either

But she did--

She wanted them to know that--

She wanted them to know she actually did exist.

She wished so much that they didn't think

That she was invisible

Now she really was.

And it was all her fault.

Reviews

[Valorie J. Shearer]

I really am craving more now! Please email when you have written more, if and when you do.. Great job with this writing! Take care~~~

[Angelwithabeard]

greta ending, very strong in imagery.keep writing.

Ok she is invisible. It is a story. a story with no characters per say. outstanding!

[Speechless Shadow]

I am not quite sure if I am finished with it, yet. It will be like a book of poems, I think. I may write more like this one. Thanks for the review.

[Senseless whatever]

Cool ending.. or is it? This was a very good read.