Book III

Part 3 of Speechless

When it happened she knew

When it happened nobody else noticed

She sat in the way back--

Just so no one would have to see her--

Or not see her.

Since she was invisible to the world anyway

It wouldn't have mattered

It was a loss that no one knew about

She felt nothing, no body parts--

nothing.

She felt light--so light

It was like landing on the moon

Weightless in thin air

It was like a door that won't open

Or one that does

And it goes to nowhere

She wasn't afraid.

She accepted it--she accepted all of it.

Reviews

[Valorie J. Shearer]

What can I say?.. I really enjoy the suspense; building and building.. I am moving on to the next.. Take care~~~

[Angelwithabeard]

true, the "it" does seem a little vague, however, sense we dont know what "it" is, we guess. wich is a good thing, writers and poets love it when readers guess, makes them want to read more. great job, keep writing.

When 'it' happened? what happened? did she die?

[Senseless whatever]

Whoa! Now I'm really intrigued, confused, scared....