Book I

It's more of a really short part, but I like naming them books instead because they wouldn't all be part of the same chapter because it doesn't seem right.

It was as if no one saw her, as if no one cared.

She didn't know they cared a lot more than she thought.

They didn't know what to do; they didn't know what to say

They never knew what she wanted--she kept all that to herself--

She kept everything to herself

She hardly ever spoke a word to anyone.

She kept so quiet that people wouldn't know she was there

She neither had any friends nor did she have enemies

No one liked her, no one hated her

She knew that.

She kept silent, moving through the hallways like a ghost

She had average grades so no one would notice--

They wondered if she had a secret, but she didn't say.

She was afraid that if she said something

That it would be too much information

So she kept quiet.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think please!

Reviews

[Valorie J. Shearer]

I really felt the solitude, and sadness; especially in the last stanza. Great job, once again! Take care~~~

[Angelwithabeard]

again great job. writing how you feel is wear it counts.

Great!

[Speechless Shadow]

Thank you. I thought about the short story thing, but I like to write poetry more, so that is what I did.

[Senseless whatever]

Nice, I like the concept. I think it would be easy to transform this into a short story.

[Kasey Jones]

I really like this poem. It gives me a new perspective on people, especially in the last stanza.