Calling All Lesbians!

why cant i find a girl

who understands me.

who will love me.

and be there for me-

nothing more.

i want a girl

who knows why

its hard for me to show

affection.

a girl

who knows

my past without judging me.

a girl

who wont leave

when i just start to get

confertable.

wont leave

because of my

addictions.

a girl

that wants

me the same

ways that i want her.

a girl

that is drop dead

beautiful....

 

i just want love.

i see them

being so loving with

the one that they

couldnt stand to loose.

and would fight for them.

instead of taking a back seat

to love.

letting someone else control them.

 

not me

i tell you.

the girl i settle

down with.

will be the one i

settle down

with forever.

Reviews

[Shellie]

Hi Sarah. I like this. I can relate, I am a lesbian too. I did feel lik that for a while wen I was a teenager and I was coming out, but I met my girlfriend when I was 19 and we are together with 6 years now, so there is hope. This piece was honestly well expressed, it mirrors the feeling of dfeat when u think you wont find love, but love WILL find you. x

[.]

I can relate to the frustration and the pain. For me, I think it just kinda happens. Like fate has it's way of putting things in our paths. I met my GF when I broke my leg. She was my physical therapist and it just kinda happened.

I think the most important thing is to be true to yourself.

Hugs!
Tara

[Marlton]

I love the way you've layed out the line in this to rellay heighten the meaning of the word and add power to specific phrases. A plaintive piece. Nice one.

[Poe]

Other than some spelling errors, It's an ok poem :)

I honestly can't relate to your pain as I am not a gaylesbian person, but do have some friends who are just that, and I know they can feel you.

I'm sorry and don't forget there's always someone out there for someone, same or different sex :)