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A Poem by speakingcolors
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i woke up, went to my computer, and wrote this.

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most people are afraid of making decisions

because they fear they will make the wrong ones

but if we never choose

then we'll never make the right ones

© 2008 speakingcolors


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Good. Short, but good. I think "one" at the end of your poem could be changed for a better word, because it's unclear what the "one" really is. But excellent job though.

I'm not going to call you on capitilization, because I think you meant it to be that way.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 14, 2008
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speakingcolors
speakingcolors

somewhere outside looking in, PA



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poet/songwriter/author sometimes I feel so much it hurts. i have all these thoughts running through my head, little segments of a whole that i can't see. most of them never get put down in writ.. more..

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