between

i'm feeling kind of dizzy

stuck somewhere between sanity and my life

i've been searching all night

but i can't find which way is up

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

Weird poem�
In my opinion this emotion of being confused would have ,,looked,, better in a story. You know, when you expose your confusion about something ppl expect to find out it's root, and that would have to be a little more than saying that you wish to ,,find which way is up,,.

A.M.

[Last Lying Look]

good job. I think this is good because it's short and you didn't over do it.
:)

[dilettante1890]

I like it. Says a lot in a short little burst of words and energy---my favorite kind of poem.