my fear of flowers

i'm scared dandylion

scared of what's going to happen

but know that i'm willing to face my fears

just to see you bloom

Reviews

[Emily B]

full of grace

[Vanessa]

There is something incredibly sweet about this. I like the repetition, for it gives a sense of importance to certain things. I really like the way that you bring shortness to the table whilst you deliver such greatness.
This is fantastic.

--vk

[Tony Hwilka]

A very simple poem, and I like it. Thank you for sharing. Tony

[Dalaina Renee]

This poem is definatley an eye catcher!!

[Anima Inspired]

Delicate...like the flower that you are writing about. I think this is a good metaphor for life, in that often times we must destroy something in order to create something better...we must tear things down in order to rebuild them better; it's the cirlce of life. Beautifully written.