Please Tell Me

This is to all those in my life

who never let me down

To the ones who let me live

but never let me drown

 

This is to all my greatest years

tucked away in memory

And all remembered names

carved in emery

 

But it may be time to leave

it may be time to go

 

So please tell me if I'm worth saving

cause maybe I don't know

And please tell me if I'm falling down

to blood red colored snow

 

This is to all my guiding lights

who helped me in the dark

and held me in the rain

You've left your final mark

 

And it may be time to leave

it may be time to go

 

So please tell me if I'm worth saving

cause maybe I don't know

And please tell me if I'm falling down

to blood red colored snow

Reviews

[Mavis Bard]

I like your theme. I guess it's because I feel that way sometimes. I'm good at hiding it.

I think, though, you have too many adjectives describing 'snow'.
I suggest removing 'colored'; 'blood red' will still feel just as intense, if not more so, without it