it's time

it's time

A Poem by speakingcolors

it's time,

time for me to wake up.

but i can't,

i've been up dreaming all night.

© 2008 speakingcolors


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cute! I like this little piece!

Posted 16 Years Ago
ah - very nice play...
like the repeat of time - confident - adds a `time passes` element to such a short piece...
would it add al ittle impact to break up that last line?
`i've been up dreaming all night.`

`i've been up
dreaming all night.`
just a thought
nice piece leave me wondering just what you've been `daydreaming` about at night-
yeah nice play there
thanks



Posted 16 Years Ago

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speakingcolors
speakingcolors

somewhere outside looking in, PA



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poet/songwriter/author sometimes I feel so much it hurts. i have all these thoughts running through my head, little segments of a whole that i can't see. most of them never get put down in writ.. more..

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