I Saw An Angel

I don't think I'm done with it, but it's been sitting around for a couple months and I can't seem to add anything to it. If I do, you'll be the first to know.

I saw an angel fall from the sky.

It feel down to the waters.

As I watch it fall, I cried

But I don't know why.

 

I could feel it's pain in my heart,

It was sorry for so much,

For everything it had done.

Evil would ne'er part.

 

I could not see where it had gone,

I knew it sank down below.

Below the surface of life

And with it the dawn.

Reviews

[Vanessa]

This makes me feel so solemn. In a good way, I mean. You've used the words in a way that brings the moon into the reader's heart. And that's quite a good thing, I'd say.

In any case, this is lovely. I'd say thay I hope you write on, because I would love to hear more of it, and I can say that adding on could bring me further compelled. But as you've said, you don't knowwhether or not you'll add more.
Good luck, anyhow.

-Vanessa Alyse