I Don't Just

I just don't want you

I need you

 

I just see you

I feel you

 

I don't just kiss you

I taste you

 

I don't just like you

I love you

 

I don't just miss you

I long for you

 

I don't just sob for you

I cry for you

 

I don't just defend you

I die for you

 

I love you

I love you

Reviews

[poemprincess]

That was really good. Burritful

[Adela Muresan]

What a beautiful and deep love dedication. Fascinating how you can express such an intense, huge feeling in so few words.
You did a good thing to write the last verse twice �it illustrates the urge to let your feelings show.

A.M.

[Ashli Nicole]

Oh my.

This poem has touch the very depths of my soul!
I give this peice five stars. c:
-Clapped Dramaticly!-

I love this piece. You are a great poet. Keep it up girl!