Water

Water

A Poem by ladywriter

I run

I trickle

I glisten from

the sun's rays

 

I speak

Can you hear?

Are you listening?

As I tell my many stories

 

I travel

Do you see them?

The people who take

In my wholesomeness

 

I am life

Do you taste me?

As I replenish your weakend soul

 

I am purity

Can you feel me?

As I wash away

Your sins

 

I am nature

I am life

I am here

I will always

Be

 

I'm a toy

I'm a savior

I'm a healer

I am water

© 2008 ladywriter


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Tim
I thought the poem was very good. In just a few short verses you have described the many wonders of water. Not only the phyisical aspect of water but also the spiritual aspect of it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This poem made me smile!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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