Summer breeze

The summer breeze whistles in my ear,
The birds tweet in symphony,
The soft blur of the wind wraps around me,
Tightening it's grip,
It kisses my forehead,
The trains run quiet,
The road war howls on,
The silent kisses in the air,
Touch me and care for me.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"The silent kisses in the air,
Touch me and care for me."
A very nice poem. I like the ending the most...:)

[Ezekiel Silver]

A remarkable poem that clearly expresses the peace that comes with summer.

[annabellee]

when i saw the title i just had to read it 'cause I also wrote a poem called summer breeze ;)
I really liked your summer breeze poem. Nice imagery. I enjoyed it a lot :)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Lovely, the summer breeze whistling through the turmoil of life.

[spayne94]

Exactly!

[Aethereal]

I enjoyed how you personified a Summer breeze. It's a happy, loving, kissing breeze that changes my mood to pleasant feelings as I read your poem. I'll put on some soft mucic the next time that I read through this poem. Tranquility above he roar of trains, and road-howl is here!

[spayne94]

Thank you, I love the summer breeze, it makes things more tranquilised as you suggested, thank you for the review, it's much appreciated x