Whirlwind

Whirlwind

A Poem by spayne94

A whirlwind of emotions escape from cranium 

and run to heart and soul 

Releasing your inner soul

Realising the truth 

Combining thoughts with your compatible one

Twirling into a plait of threads all close and tight

To represent feelings and fury

To understand, to know, to realise

To be with one another

© 2013 spayne94


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I like how accurate this is to the emotions you're trying to portray! Nice work! (P.S. it's spelled as realize*)

Posted 11 Years Ago


spayne94

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
I do understand that feeling of escaping from your head into your heart and soul, well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

spayne94

11 Years Ago

It's interesting but my aim is to correctly define my emotions in my writing. Thank you

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