I'm sorry i broke us.

i cant say much be the least i can do is say sorry...

Like things lost but never searched for

Cast aside in an attic somewhere

Tea towels bought but never used

I wait for the validation that comes from you

 

I wrote your name upon the sand

But the waves swept away our promised land

Once upon a time when we were fine

I bestowed on you a dreadful crime

 

Shattered your heart into a million pieces

Bit from an apple filled with leeches

Greener pastures do not exist

It's my fault we ended up like this

 

I'm sorry......

I can't blame you if you don't want to hear

After all the apologies there were down the years

I didn't appreciate you, love you, made you feel like you should

 

I promise given another chance I would

With love to give if you'd only take it

I broke us,I know I did

Forgive me, without you I cannot live

 

If I could turn back the clock of us I would

Return to that time, I didn't realize all was good

                        But I guess it’s too late, you now with someone else

Reviews

[mou]

Feelings are reflected deeply where the poetic rhythm is maintained..
A true sorry always reflects and it is occurred here.
Truly, this prayer will reach up to there..
Thanks for sharing

[Emily]

I loved it!!
Keep it up!!

[Dash the Reaper]

thanks for the review em

[ThePaperPrincess]

I love the descriptions that you use. "cast aside in an attack somewhere, tea towels bought but never used." This poem is just so full of feelings, I can almost feel the longing for your lost love myself. "Bit from an apple filled with leeches." Is another one of my favourite lines. The imagery is amazing.A very compelling writing. Good job, interested to read a lot more from you.

[Dash the Reaper]

i try as much to let my imagination run wild,it helps me a lot..thanks for the review

[J Shinoda]

This is enthralling. The beginning of your lines already gave movement to my imagination. I love how you used your words in animation and contrast. I love every description of the lines. And it's so emotional and strong. Good job!

[jesserose99]

I think this is my favorite one Dash...it is different and I enjoyed your analogies. A beautiful way to apologize for something you carry on your shoulders.

[Dash the Reaper]

i guess the truth did set me free..always wanted to apologize but didnt have the guts to do so