Addicted

Addicted

A Poem by Dash the Reaper

I don’t want to lose you

For you has been my fremd friend

Like a junkie I am overly addicted

You let me do as I please to you

 

I remember the first day I met you

Sad & sorrowful is what I can say

I was sure I couldn’t handle you

With time I couldn’t live without you

 

I can’t explain the awkward feeling

For it feels like nothing on this earth

At first I thought you were the worst

But as it turned out you are the best

 

Everything is picture perfect

And no one is ever coming between us

People tried to separate e us many times

But I always end up came back to you

 

For all I know you will never hurt me

Like the sky you will always be there

Through pain, sorrow, happiness, grief

I shall call out your name,

 

They say I am now anti social cause of you

And I think they are just jealousy of us

We will always be together
Always and for ever

© 2016 Dash the Reaper


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I do like this Dash, the only thing I have to say that might be a drawback is 'you let me do as I please to you', while that can be a sensual thing in a relationship when chosen, in a friendship, back and forth, it might be unhealthy from time to time. It might be I am reading it wrong too, so let me know if I am. The rest of it though, I get a really good feel from...somebody you care deeply for that you want to keep in your life. I think you will too as long as you reciprocate...no need to be a loner when you care about someone as deeply as you seem to here!! lovely words

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dash the Reaper

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review love.



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wonder who you wrote this one about....

Posted 8 Years Ago


I do like this Dash, the only thing I have to say that might be a drawback is 'you let me do as I please to you', while that can be a sensual thing in a relationship when chosen, in a friendship, back and forth, it might be unhealthy from time to time. It might be I am reading it wrong too, so let me know if I am. The rest of it though, I get a really good feel from...somebody you care deeply for that you want to keep in your life. I think you will too as long as you reciprocate...no need to be a loner when you care about someone as deeply as you seem to here!! lovely words

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dash the Reaper

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review love.

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Dash the Reaper
Dash the Reaper

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I am not that young and not that old either, I want to experience more in life ,the poems I write about are personal experiences whilst some I just imagine out of the blue, if you find yourself wonde.. more..

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