Words actualy speaks louder than actions..

i hope one day you will read this and know the feeling i get when i look at you...

So tender and soft like a dove

When you smile all I see is light

It feels like you were sent from above

All I want is you, a star so bright

 

I constantly stare at those juicy lips

And you look at me deep in the eye

Like a bar tender ,I want you so bad like tips

 I look back helpless & I don’t know why

 

You remind me of her

The one I long for in my dreams

Something so special and yet so rare

I want you forever in my arms

 

I feel for you deeply

And I can’t bring myself to tell you this

Cause every time I say the words, I get hurt badly

It’s painful just like I have been stung by bees

 

I can only let it out this way

Writing my feelings on a page

For I will show this to you one day

And you get to keep this paper until u age

Reviews

[jesserose99]

its hard when you feel something for someone and have to keep it inside, but poetry is a beautiful thing and when you can write beautiful words like you have done here and come back to someone important in your life and show them what they meant to you at a time when...then you truly get the power of words.

nice write...well thought out I think.

[Dash the Reaper]

thanks for the review love.words are powerful for real

[Unknown Poet]

Amazing... it touched my heart...
"I feel for you deeply
And I can’t bring myself to tell you this
Cause every time I say the words, I get hurt badly
It’s painful just like I have been stung by bees"

[cycy]

Interesting poem....i can relate.

[Dash the Reaper]

yah right i know boo boo