special times

for some one i used to love..

 Special times we use to share,

 Nothing else in life could compare

 

Each day together we used to treasure

How we brought each other so much pleasure.

 

 

As the days went by and time seemed to pass,

 Our special times seemed to pass.

 

Our talks, they were hours long,

Till one day they seemed to be gone.

 

How I long and miss our talks,

 Along with our long walks.

 

I remember the times we couldn't say goodbye,

 And now its all we do to say hi.

 

                                               How the days I wish could rewind                                                             And make them like the memories in my mind.

Reviews

[Penny]

Something we can dedicate to a school friend, after we start college. Sweet little poem, though you can make it better. Nice job there buddy and thanks for sharing this refreshing piece with me cycy.

[KWP]

well yeah - life rolls on moment to moment - hard to accept and let go sometimes - great sentiment XX

[Sami Khalil]

A really good one. Pen on, please...:)............

[cycy]

i know the feeling....great poem