Someone I Know

A concave man, broken smile sparkling in the sunlight
Eyes communicating love, kindness, gentleness
Caressing the outlines of reality with his sight
He holds everything in maybe he's pensive
What will he find? That his feelings are a world
that is too immense to be expressed
Or maybe he saves his world for the special few
The ones who listened who haven't fled
Like the gift of flowers is the gift of his truth

Reviews

[Acropolix]

The truth comes in many forms, you have brought it with an excellent poem. Brilliant write.

[sparklingfacet]

Thank you for your kind words. I have always enjoyed poetry but just started picking it up again. The encouragement is greatly appreciated :)

[Meallea Pomorette]

The first thing I noticed is the font... You should make it larger... You don't want your readers to suffer right??? The poem is nice and many hidden meanings I think... Kind of confusing for me 'cause I can't get in line with thoughts... Nonetheless keep it up...

[sparklingfacet]

Sorry didn't realize my font was so small. Thank you for your feedback. The poem is about a broken man I care for very much. Hopefully my other poems will be more clear to you :)

[Meallea Pomorette]

Aaahhh....
I finally get it...
Thanks for clearing that one out...
btw, I like the last line of the poem...
(^_^)