You

You bend me and break me,

You cut me and shake me,

You ask me and make me,

You love me and hate me.

You release me and tape me.

You chisel and shape me.

You hurt me and fake me.

You bring me and take me.

You f**k me and wake me.

You want me and rape me.

Never the same two days in a row,

You butchered me into letting you go...

Now I'm alone and letting you know

I'm stronger than ever...

Thanks to you.

Reviews

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Bit of a Rhyme going on here the struggles of life make us stronger. Interesting but yet pulls me to read it again i love how you rhyme the writes i dont usally rhyme much in my Writings but great write

[Thomas Fleet]

Excellent use of words/rhyme to not only describe vivid, heart-wrenching feelings, but to show that the struggles only make us stronger and help us live longer. Great, great work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is outstanding. No waste of words. Your statements told a sad story. I like the positive ending. Can't allow the misery of people to hold us down. A excellent poem.
Coyote