You have been

You have been my darkness and you have been my light.

You have been my peace and you have been my fight.

You have been my earth and you have been my flight.

You have been my wrong and you have been my right.

You have been my shadows and you have been my bright.

You have been my maybe and you have been my might.

You have been my peasant and you have been my knight.

You have been my bark and you have been my bite.

You have been my days and you have been my night.

You have been my questions and you have been my sight.

Reviews

[Geel]

that is simply beautful...so much emotion is felt through is scribe...touching the soul...words which i have lived and felt...job well done

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ying/yang... funny how the one you love is a blessing and a curse... simply stated but a bold statement.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

I am left in the open......wonderful contrast.......the climax of this peace is it leaves the reader in space........to make his/her own conclusion

[Fallen Angel]

I think the rhyming is taking away from the poem and it's a bit flat, i see the emotions you are trying to carry over but i don't feel them, and part of being a poet is drawing the reader into the emotions, making them feel what you feel. nice try though and not a bad poem.