With and Without You

With and Without You

A Poem by Laura Sparkle

I stood at the top of the world and looked down
Giggling and laughing safely from your side.

I held on to the railing, and held on to your hand,
Dangled my feet over the side without a second thought.

I basked in the light and the darkness atop,
And breathed the clear air and the color of the world.

I touched my chest and felt my heart beating,
The soul within me had not but a scratch.

I traced my visions in pencil on papers,
And saw you forever holding my hand.

I was safe on the top of the world,
Safe at your side.


I fell from my throne and on my way down,
I checked my side, and you did not fall.

I hit the ground and smashed my head to the cement,
Stood up and dusted myself off.

I looked at the heavens and smiled knowing you're still there,
Standing strong, and laying around lazy in the sun.

I looked around at the world I fell in,
And the color had gone, and the sound had faded.

I checked my clothing, and found it painted black, and wet,
The blood from my veins seeping through.

I touched my chest, and there was no heart, no hope...
There is no life in your absence, and I descended to hell

© 2010 Laura Sparkle


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Poem is powerful. Story of two different end of emotion and life. Beginning hopeful and joyful. Ending was the descended to hell. You took the reader on a journey of two direction we may fall upon. A outstanding poem. Made me think.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Poem is powerful. Story of two different end of emotion and life. Beginning hopeful and joyful. Ending was the descended to hell. You took the reader on a journey of two direction we may fall upon. A outstanding poem. Made me think.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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