Patience

I don't have the patience to sit around and wait

The games you play are boring

And I'm losing your scent.

The hourglass is empty

And now it's pouring tears,

A vampire has drained you

And now you're desert dry,

Holding me captive at your stupid side.

All the blood that's dripping

Doesn't change one thing,

You're asking for forgiveness

But is it all you need?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem a lot. No wasted words. I like the strong statements leading the reader to a perfect ending. But is it all you need? A excellent poem.
Coyote