Hunger

...vampires...

Hungry again, I know my dear

The monster inside begs to be fed,

And I can feel your teeth sharpen

And I can feel your throat itch and hurt

And I can feel the thirst burn.

 

Come much closer, darling boy,

Let me express how happy I am

Now that I can quench that thirst,

Calm that painful hunger,

And hold you close.

 

Sink your teeth in me dearest,

My neck is open for any reservation,

You never do, too obvious,

“Too cliché,” that’s what you say,

So aim lower? My wrist?

 

Feel the pain, darling friend,

Sweet ecstasy for both of us,

Feel the juice run down your throat,

And sink those teeth a little deeper,

I give you my all: my mind and my blood.

Reviews

[Ian]

Wow!
Well what can I say about it? Just very well written, awesome way to express the thirst, the desire of blood, wonderful piece.
This is definitively one of the best vampire writings I've ever read!
I love vampires... and this is an awesome poem. I really enjoyed it.
Great job!
Applauses for you!

[Soul Magic✯]

wow this is the hottest dark piece i read today. very sexy delivery... i enjoyed reading this one

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You know I love vampires and this is a deliciously tasty piece of writing that brings out the dark sexiness of the immortal creature.