The Strong

The Strong

A Poem by Laura Sparkle

You know what I see as strong?

The strong are technically the weak,

The ones who cried and fell apart

But yet had the strength to stand and restart.

 

The strong are the ones that feel,

The ones who cry and scream

In the dead of the night…

And run to hide in the dark.

 

The strong are the ones who stay calm

And in a panic moment take control…

They pull together all that fall apart

And push the pain deeper in the dark.

 

The strong are the week…

Society may deny…

But my heroes are

The ones who try.

© 2008 Laura Sparkle


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I have enjoyed this piece very much! Yes it does take a strong person to admit their weak points.
A strong person will overcome those weak points when it counts.

There is one typo in the last stanza....
The strong are week ...(weak)

Fabulous ink!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Laura Sparkle
Laura Sparkle

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