I wish I was there

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I wish I was as strong as you are

Look in the face of loneliness and smile.

I wish I was as wise as you are,

Know all that’s best and stand by my decisions.

I wish I was as smart as you are,

I wish I was as sweet as you are…

I wish I was as in control as you are.

 

I wish I was there.

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Wow...this says something for two halves making a whole. Great write. I thoroughly enjoyed its uniqueness. Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

[shinybluestars03]

Great short a very emotional poem.
Very heart-felt.
It is always hard to want to be somewhere
that you cant actually be.

Thanks for sharing

Best wishes

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awe Laura what a sentimental piece... hey and you are smart and sweet.