Still

Laying in bed ever so quiet,
Thoughts infecting my every breath�
The desire for you burning my flesh.
Would I be allowed to tell you I miss you?
Would it be okay to say I still love?
Would it be okay to say that I need you?
�still�.

Bleeding ever so suddenly on the white sheets,
Drowning my pillows in sorrowful mourning�
Pretending to be okay yet again lying to myself�
So would I be allowed to tell you I miss you,
And would it be okay to say I still love?
Would it be okay to say I need you�
�still�

Crying ever so painfully,
Pretending yet again to be fine�
Lying to myself and everyone around me�
Wondering if I would be allowed to tell you I miss you,
If it�d be okay to say I still love you?
Would it be okay to say I need you�
�still�

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Wonderments...hmmmm...I like it! :) Yet...."still...." What? Where's the end? There's got to be more...hasn't there?
Perhaps a last line..."Alive"
Thus ending "Still.....Alive...." More profound I would feel.

It certainly captures loss, pain, and sorrow! It can be felt all....the....way....Though!
Well crafted to your normal impecable standards!

Great Sad Poem (That i'm sure has some truth to...)
Infinity's Shadow

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You certainly bring to light a vivid picture of someone in emmence pain trying to cope with losing a loved on and wondering why and questing the world. The loneliness and sadness is very well spelled out here.