Drink (2)

Drink (2)

A Poem by Laura Sparkle
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Inspired from the cool photo I got from the wonderful Rock And Roll Cowboy!

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The full moon, such a delight!

 

No need for lighting, just lay on the grass with me baby.

 

We haven’t talked in a few weeks, it’s been so long!

 

Come closer, closer, closer to me…. There we go.

 

C**k your head back and close those blue eyes,

 

One –two- three, here comes the bite.

 

Ah! The delight of hot blood rushing down my throat!

 

Perfect, baby. Here, your turn to drink…

 

Just us two darling… until the sun comes up!

© 2008 Laura Sparkle


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very nice!!! More more!! Little longer with some more action. just my suggstion. I loved it though! It was very deep and expressive!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Dark? Yes. Sexy? Kind of. Well done? Hardly. Try again later.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dark and sexy...quite romantic. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh wow how powerful... and though it speaks of vampires it also has an underline feel of a love that no amount of time or space can make it fade as they live in the forever as they are blind to any other person... This is brilliant!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Laura Sparkle
Laura Sparkle

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