Lost

Lost

A Poem by Ryan
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Six words!

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Wanted: Lost father. Son: Still searching.

© 2014 Ryan


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this makes me feel that the father is not lost, his body is there but his mind and soul are not or he started acting a different way that made the writer where did his hero go and who is this new guy
this is amazing, but it is sad and it really hurts .i'm sorry and thank you for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is beautiful. It seems like it's the perfect words for a billboard with a picture of the father above the words. Nice work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Ryan

10 Years Ago

Thank you Shaquana! Ahaha I picture the same thing!
Short but wonderful...Thank you for sharing...:)...................

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 14, 2014
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Ryan
Ryan

Grandville, MI



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