Lucid Dreaming.

A Poem by Spacecadet

Thoughts to paper.

As you're fast asleep,
I'm wide awake in this arctic chill
That's invaded my heart.
The sound of the ocean
Calms my aching heartbeat
And as the waves kiss the shore
They sweep away the footprints
We left scattered on the sand
All those tears ago.

© 2014 Spacecadet

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Coyote Poetry

No weakness in the poem. You create location, thoughts and sadness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

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Added on March 12, 2014
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Tags: Dreams, Elusive, Sand, Footprints, Ache, Heartbeat, Prose Poem

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Spacecadet

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I'm a student, moody writer and keen discoverer of soulful writing. Everything I write is right from my heart. Being a hopeless romantic, my favorite genre to read and write is romance. Heartbreak mak.. more..