Ink & tears.

Another addition to the tiny tale series.

"But it's not with you anymore, he stole it"
Her mind whispered.
"I can feel it pulsating through my body. Each beat reminds me that I'm alive, even though I'm not really alive, without him"
She sighed as her finger traced the tattoo of a hollow heart on her wrist.

Author's Note

A story in a few lines. I hope you'll like it!

Reviews

[W. C. Forrest]

pensive musing, you have constructed the reduction of oneness eloquently.

[Spacecadet]

Thank you, I seemed to have achieved what I was aiming for :)

[ron]

I can relate to this. It hurts when your not with the one who holds your heart.

[Spacecadet]

God knows, its one of the worst kinds of pain.

[ron]

I know it is. Big hugs

[Bowers]

sad, thoughtful... broken .... lovely write

[Spacecadet]

Thanks Bowers :)

[Chris]

Melancholy and wishful. A dusting of hope.

[Spacecadet]

Broken hope.. Thanks for the review!

[Chris]

Broken happens ...a lot. It IS a minefield as we walk within a relationship. Many are at no fault - just life as we live it. Sometimes you don't realize how empty you are until ...you just are.

[Spacecadet]

Beautifully put, Chris :)
At least we're introduced to the survivor inside of us along the way!

[Stephen]

Lol! Yeah, I like this one and even last line makes me laugh! I love watching angels with "Tattoos" not bunch of tattoos on whole body but a one tattoo like on her waits or on her back side of neck something like that. Anyway, leave it!

I really enjoy the story or a tale series, what all I gotta suggest you to make you help out is "If you do write stories then try stretching 'em lengthwise" because #stories need an average strength ...like for an example, you can write short stories in 700 words, bit one in 1500 words and much more. but i'd suggest you to write stories in between 1000-1500 words cause it's a great strength to me.

The title's very nice, "Ink and tears" it's filled with emotions. And the short story tale showed how beautiful your heart is cause your short write is a combination of love and emotions and of course feelings of your heart too.

Keep up the great work!

[Jackson H. Harley]

Lots of emotion in just a few lines, another great write :)

[Spacecadet]

Thank you!

[Madalyn Beck]

Oh sweet love, how bitter you can be. What you have written is something we all know too well. Good write! :)

[Spacecadet]

Bitter sweet it is! Thanks for the review :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sad musings about lost love .Well penned my friend :)

[Spacecadet]

Thanks Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

Nice and gentle poem. keep on the good work

[Spacecadet]

Thank you! :)

[Frieda P]

Gentle reminiscences of a lost love and a broken heart that speak loudly, you told an entire story in so few poignant sentiments here Spacecadet. Nicely pen'd. :-)

[Spacecadet]

Thanks Frieda! Your reviews are always much appreciated :)