Silent whispers

Whispers of hope and love

Silent Whispers

The moon shone it's light

Down on her face one winter night

It took her right back to that place

The time they stood in a warm embrace

Standing so close, trying to beat the cold

Through just their eyes, a story was told

Soundless words filled the air,

Stone cold hearts melted in a stare

Intertwined hands started to come loose,

Standing at a crossroads, what path should they choose? 

They took the path less traveled by,

The road that few would dare to try

Where the falls are low and the climbs are steep

But promises are meant to keep

Run out of the darkness with hearts full of hope

From a world full of misery, they would elope. 

Author's Note

One of my happier/more hopeful writes. I hope you like it!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive poem for love and hope.
"They took the path less traveled by,
The road that few would dare to try
Where the falls are low and the climbs are steep
But promises are meant to keep"
I like the above lines. Good to take the lonely and safe roads. Less things to draw attention to you. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Spacecadet]

Thanks for your kind and ever prompt reviews, Coyote! I'm happy you enjoyed it :)

[Frieda P]

Ahh definitely hopeful and much happier. Luverly sentiments whisper from your page Spacecadet.

Soundless words filled the air,
Stone cold hearts melted by the stare

I like that stanza, think 'in or within a stare' would work better though, imho anywho. ;-)

[Spacecadet]

Thank you Freida, I'm glad you like it! And I'm going to use that suggestion, I was searching within myself for a better way to frame that sentence but I didn't find one so thank you for that!

[Frieda P]

You're welcome, I know sometimes those thoughts just get stuck and don't come out the way we want them to read, been there. ;-)