Okay, so I have to be honest, and say that when I first read through this I didn't really consider it a story. I actually thought of it more as a poem. However, after reading through it again, and reading the tag line above, the whole idea of this 'tiny tales' or micro-story really sunk in. I found it really cool. So much was said in just 33 words, and I'm not sure that it could be any better if it was dragged out into several pages. You did such a fantastic job of making it so incredibly visual and gripping, and you barely needed any words to do so (less than what I am using now!!!). The more I think about this, the more I am amazed by not only the concept but also the great writing. Well done. I'd seriously love to read more of these types of stories.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Wow, thank you for your incredibly kind words and taking the time to really analyse this and look at.. read moreWow, thank you for your incredibly kind words and taking the time to really analyse this and look at it from different points of view! Its much appreciated :) I'll be sure to send you a read request to more of these kinds of stories in the future!
Could be a realistic tale. A lot of thief of the soul willing to leave you for dead. You sad a lot in a few words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
I'm a student, moody writer and keen discoverer of soulful writing. Everything I write is right from my heart. Being a hopeless romantic, my favorite genre to read and write is romance. Heartbreak mak.. more..