A word of advice.

My thought of the moment. Hope it makes you smile.

you can't rush greatness.
 
that's what makes it great.

ever eaten un - aged cheese?




Exactly.

Author's Note

it really doesn't make much sense, but the little sense it does make makes sense. (if you get that)

Reviews

[Luna Northstar]

Wow, great job; did u come up with it yourself? what inspired u???? well, whatever u did, it was great.

[Coyote Poetry]

It does make sense. Nothing easy is worthwhile. Time and effort bring success and happiness. A excellent poem. I like this poem. Food can be understood by most people.
Coyote

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very good advice.

[Henry Daube]

yeahs

[Millionth Muse]

An apt sentiment...and a great little metaphor for life in general. If we are patient, time is actually on our side.

I think that you'd be better with "ever eaten un-aged cheese?" instead of "every"

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this made me laugh, short but good, thanks for putting a smile on my face:)

[lauren emily]

I just love this..It's short, funny, and straight to the point. Into my favorites you go little poem..:D

[just rose.]

I just love this. Its simplicity and brevity remind me of Pound's "In A Station of the Metro." And of course the humor makes me smile.