The Economy Poem.

What does a day of boredom, the economy, and the mind of a 12 year old accomplish?

There once was a man named Bob
In '09 he lost his job
A wife! 3 kids!
He had a family to support
He couldn't just hide in his son's old fort
So Bob went a thinkin
And then he started packin
He traveled the country doing odd job
Everything to get money - avoiding the mob
When Bob came back his wife and children were oddly missing
Then he found them with another man living
The wife told Bob, "It was best for the kids!"
"So you married another man? Was it me you wanted to rid?"
The wife nodded and left with the man and the children
Now the man was very sad you see,
Very angry too indeed
So he worked really hard and earned ALOT of money
and guess who was coming back crying to him - his old honey!

Author's Note

i realize now that there are two lines that don't rhyme with the rest of the poem. (black) OH WELL. enjoy (;

Reviews

[Nayan]

Good write, but you can improve it, I believe.

[Rhonda]

very good! the flow is good and this relates to some people. i enjoyed it :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. The flow and the wisdom was very good. Ending was excellent. Thank you.
Coyote