Crazy Crush, babe

Crazy Crush, babe

A Poem by Tahna

Freedom of the heart

Takes over the logic of the brain.

Loving from the start

But there’s nothing to gain.

 

Questionable.

Crazy

Sweet

Unconditional.

Some words might describe her affection.

But yet, he does not feel the same.

 

She doesn't know.

No, not anything about how you feel.

What is it you feel?

Lust

Affection

Perhaps you just flattered.

But that can't be right.

She loves you

Don’t you get it?

 

Her kind heart, is loving unconditionally to you.

Oh you know,

Yeah you do,

But it doesn't stop you

You lead her on

You tell her things

That makes her heart swing

Because you couldn’t cause her pain

What’s the real feelings you attain?

 

Her crazy, determined, amazing, unconditional love for you

Do you even know?
What does it mean to you?

 

The crazy feeling

That feeling she feels for you

Love, if that’s the right word.

© 2010 Tahna


Author's Note

Tahna
I wrote this poem in a rhyming yet non rhyming feeling would make it

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Sometimes, if you like someone, its better to just show them you do, rather than drag it for too long. I like the balance between rhymes and non-rhymes. Its like a battle between courage to show them and the other half full of shyness. Excellent :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was very good!!!!!! Keep writing. I loved this!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 16, 2010
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Tahna
Tahna

New Zealand



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