Love sweet Love

Love sweet Love

A Poem by Tahna

Love sweet love

Turned me upside down

My thoughts hard to think of

I’m feeling bound

 

My head full of excuse

I’m confused

What do I do?

,  

I find being hurt

Makes you think “What’s life for?”

Life is something you can’t ignore

 

Love sweet love

I was broken

Turn myself around

Stand back up

Let my feet touch the ground

 

Love sweet love

The hurt I soon forget

© 2010 Tahna


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Good for you to stand back up after having your heart broken. Love lost is not something that should keep us down, we're better than that. The heart can mend and keep on beating :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


The "Love sweet love" lines you opened up some of the stanzas with reminds me of this song by Anita Baker called "Sweet Love." This is a great poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was extremely good. I loved it. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 15, 2010
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Tahna
Tahna

New Zealand



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