Victorian Bride

I want too much

Don’t you think?

Expect too much

Too much from you

 

Perhaps I should look up

Look up from you

Stand up

Forget you

 

Not what you want

Is it?

My attention you crave

 

Do you want too much?

Expect me to wait at your side

Like some Victorian bride

Your love blind

If its love at all

Author's Note

bitter i know, review much appreciated

Reviews

[Livenrite]

I must agree with Becca. The repetition did add a good spice into your piece. Good work! Thanks for sharing:)

[Becca*Type2012]

Beautiful. I like the repeating words. They add to the meaning of the poem. Again just plain beautiful.