Lets be

Lets be

A Poem by Tahna

Let's hold hands
Because I can't wait anymore
Get your body next to mine
Let's loose ourselves
In the track of time

Well never see the daylight
If we close our eyes
Wake me up
And let's dance 
In the moonlight

Darling
Can we be together?
Let's be one, forever
I can't help but see 
What we could be

I only think of you
Through the daytime.
But the nighttime comes
And I dream of you

I only want the simple things
And everything else
Let me share food with you
And a kiss
Let me rest on your shoulder
Let us be bliss.

I'm so stuck on you
Let's be.
Let's be everything.

© 2012 Tahna


Author's Note

Tahna
Yup ignore grammar problems literally just wrote this at 11.30pm on my iPod touch

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This is such a beautiful ...I love the longing to your lover waiting for the time you will hold each other for real...I can really relate to your heart and words...tender and full of love...like you :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


well it is really really good it is well laid out the stanzas are excellent the usa of meter is clever and all in all i really like it you are very talented indeed

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 10, 2012
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Tahna
Tahna

New Zealand



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