All I Need

A poem

The grass is billowing by the steed. The night is so very clear. all I really, really need. is to know that you are there. The moon is shining brilliantly white. the stars are twinkling everywhere. so why am I crying on this beautiful night? I am crying because you are not there.

Reviews

[Morrigan Nicole]

A simple poem with the rhyme scheme of abab cbcb Used to its fullest. I love the way that you used such perfect imagery to convey your feelings of loneliness and want. Often times, when writing such as this is read by the auditor, we can relate very well to it, to the feeling of desire for the other, and this type of relatable literature makes it all that much enjoyable to read. We can have a deeper understanding and connection with it. I think you have done a great job on this one. I personally have gone through this on my own! I understand how the lonely feeling can make even the best of nights depressing. Maybe due to the fact that the night is so beautiful and you long to Share the feeling of bliss, ease and happiness with another human being, but inside you know too well that such can never happen, so the beauty is destroyed, and all the speaker can find in it, is tears.

Overall, I would rate this easily at a hundred.

[The Wave]

Thanks alot for the detailed review:)

[Morrigan Nicole]

Anytime!

[Be myself!]

This is amazing. So many people go through this same situation. You tell it lie it is in this 'simple yet to the point' poem. I love it.

[The Wave]

Thanks so much:)

[Be myself!]

Your welcome! :)

[Tori Hughes]

so simple, but so very beautiful. i was never good at rhyming poems. im more of a free verse girl myself. but this is very very good. i like it :)

[Lover Of Words]

Amazing!

[The Wave]

You are way too kind, Kelsey!

[Lover Of Words]

:) well your really good

[The Wave]

Thanks...Making me blush...lol.

[Lover Of Words]

lol haha your welcome ha

[Riley Mistwood]

Short buit bittersweet. Nicely done

[The Wave]

Thanks:) I appreciate it!

[Chesney W.]

so simple. But I love this anyways. A very good write.
-Chesney Chey(:

[The Wave]

well thank you very much:)

[Chesney W.]

you are very much welcome(:

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh how touching, and sad, missing someone. I really like the ending stanza. Really nice write.

[Kaylor Mason]

Sparse, simple, and exquisitely constructed. The words seemed to flow right off the page and ring out in the quiet

[The Wave]

thanks man

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Short but well written with lot of emotion. Sometimes poems like that are better than long ones. Like it.

Pendragon

[The Wave]

Thanks a lot:)

[Relic's Bare Trees]

You're welcome.

[Lost in Wonderland]

So much beauty and emotion packed in so little words. I loved the story you put into it; fantastic! 100/100
God Bless:)
~Mickey

[The Wave]

Thanks so much:)

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

This excellent. The emotion is easily recognized and understood; I feel for you. Great work, my friend

[The Wave]

Well thank you very much:) Nice to meet you BTW!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Nice to meet you too, and you're welcome :)