Sonnet

my sonnet for school

 

A heart of love shall never fully die

A heart that’s sound overtakes all the rest

Only his real love can make my heart fly

And his love can stand up to any test

 

There’s one guy who holds the keys to my heart

Stands strong and tall for one and all to see

Gallant and charming from the very start

My soldier forever he will be

 

For once I know this love is true

You’ve captured my heart, my very being

A love as deep as the ocean is blue

And forever shall our two hearts sing

 

Until the day that our two hearts meet

Only then will this true love be complete

Reviews

[Deseret]

i really like this, its sweet and complete, and it makes more sense then my own attempt at a simalar message, I think that a more descriptive title would make it more rounded. I hope you find what you are looking for :)

[WhoaitSarah]

Aw, i really liked this.

thanks! (: