THE ANNIVERSARY

                                                         THE ANNIVERSARY

I ran to you and fell into the limbo of my life.

What I thought was my Savior 

Has been my demise.

You tore down my walls,  promising they would 

Turn into a path leading 

Straight to your heart.

I ignored the  signs

The No Exit, Stop, Dead End...

Racing down that one way street.

The crash left me wondering

What is real and what

Is merely a fabrication of the mind.

Are we committed as lovers or

Just romantically connected strangers?

Sometimes neither, sometimes both.

There are times I think you have stolen my youth

Or perhaps gave it  back to me once again.

If nothing else, you make an inspiring muse.

Reviews

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~ you bet... your poetic voice is haunting and captivating... you write as if you're writing words from centuries ago... and they echo... there's so much depth in your poetry that it resounds... it's a war zone out there, sweetheart... between the purists who love love and the cynics who think they can change the definition of love... i'm not proud of the life i live... i need to live much more... but i'm truly proud of the kind of love i love... no cynic can survive its force... no one can rob me of hope... of poetry... of viewing the future as if it was full of possibilities... i relate to your poetry and your poetic voice a lot...

[Southern Cross]

Across the many miles, you and have have shared this crazy bond..and yes we love with abandon and never lament over the consequences of it all. Thank you for the unconditional review never judging my intentions or thinking me a fool for love. Many seem to shake their heads and give me a tisk tisk ..move on girl..attitude..Bless you for your all encompassing beautiful heart

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~ yeah... you said it... we're two crazy cookies... :P

~ there's one more of us... her name is lynn... she's an angel... and yesterday, she said on one of my posts...

"If you don't take chances are you not a prisoner? Your heart will know when it's time to quit, Serah :)"

~ i'll say the same to you... your heart will know when it's time to quit... until then, we'll let our hearts be free to love... :)

[MOON]

Poignant , true heartbreak sometimes makes us write great poetry. Love the last stanza in paricular.Honest powerful write.

[Southern Cross]

Sometimes we have to make the best of every situation and see the bright side of everything. Thank you for reading and the review.