THE IMMORTAL-love & soule

A Story by debraj

this is my first story... plsss everyone tell me how is it

A boy name Reyan, and a girl name Anny love each others since they were 12 years old...Their love story was very popular amongs their friends...They known as romio-juliet to their friends....Their chemistery was very strong so that god also had no power to make them apart from each-other...Anny came off a rich family but Reyan belongs to a middle-class family...What ever they had no problem in their love life..... :-) :-) ... But one behaviour of Reyan which Anny dnt like.......coz if anybody tell Reyan that they need money or any thing he just gave them though he need it more than them....But when he do not get any help from them he feel very sorrow,sometime he cried in this kind of situation.....Anny told him a lot of time to change himself but he can't
Well,there has a little story in Reyans life which made him like that.....Wanna know ??? Ok listen then...
Reyan also had a peacefull life. .He lived with his parents and with his 4 months older sister....He loved everyone but loved his sister little extra :-) ... one morning he heard from his mother that his father decided to go for picnic..... Hearing that he jumped from his bed and went to her sister's bed and told her with joy & a big smile on his face...But i dnt know if his 4 months older sis would understand his any words but she also smiled by seen her brother's face ... That day he was very happy....But he had no idea that this day gonna change his life....They set for theri destination to goa in train of 5:40 am.... after crossing 8 km there was a village ....The villagers heard a sound like a big thing is falling from sky....What-ever when they came outside of their house then everything end....during increasing the speed of that train it came out of track so occured an accident..... after 35 minuts later rescue team came and brought all the passengers outside from train....now it was minium 1:30 pm when Reyan opned his eyes in a hospital;saw that his parents were already died.......His 4 months sister was fighting with death.......then he started to pary to save her life.. .. told god to take his life but he just need his sister alive.... doctors were trying but unfortunately...ahhh!!! :'( :'( god, that day did not look at Reyan...his most lovely sister also died....he loved his sister too much..
So he brusted into cry....all peoples were looking him crying insted of their patients.......he was crying like mad..... he just hited his head against walls....he was trying to kill himself coz his most lovely person,his sister is no more in this world..... he saw his famile died infront him...then there was Reyans auncle & aunty...They took Reyan in their house...They had no child so now they got a child...they try to full fill his all hopes.....they loved reyan very much..... he was effected very much by that incident...even he saw that incident in his dream and shout out of fear.. .. he knew what is pain...What is valu of mromises...so he never broke any promises in his life...and always tried to help people.....
After got Anny he was able to forget that incidend ....But sheldom that incident disturbed him in his dream......
The story i m gonna tell you when they were 18... They passed school final on science......Both of 'em got good marks....Anny's father decided to sent her london for her further studies.....After hearing this news she felt very happy,but with-in a moment her happyness turned into deep sorrow....coz she could not live without her boyfriend. She told her father that she did not want to go there.But at least she was forced to go london by her father.....She cried in her room & then called Reyan,told him to meet in that place where they usally mate......
It was nearly 6:30 pm they mate. Now Anny told all things to Reyan that she is going to london for her education..... after that both 2 of them had not told anything to each-others..... Just they looked eachothers face for a long time ... tears were coming out from theirs eyes..... though that night they didn't speak but told a lot throug their eyes... after a while they hold each-others tightly..... and bursted into cry.... really this evening was the greatest sad full romantic evening they ever spent.... . After that Reyan hold her cheeks and looked at her face....clean her tears which flows on his cheeks....and told her that he is very happy to hear that. He tried to smiled but tears were coming out from his eyes continusly. He hurted very badly coz after saw the dead body of his family even his lovely sister's most painfull death which hurt him badly but after got Anny he was able to forget all this but now she was also going out of his rich... he was thinging to commited suciside. ..but he promised his auncle that he never do anything silly ... so this way was closed for him.....by the way....tommorow she would set for london....Anny told him to come in airport to tell her bye.... Reyan promised her that he would always chat with her & also told everything to Anny.....
Now this day 26 th july 2011 it was the most painfull day 2 of them...... they just cried all time in their rooms.....now this is 6:35 pm.... Anny reached in the airport ...the flight was 7:00 pm. She was very disapointed that all her near & dear ones come to say her good bye,but her most nearst person was not there & did not pic up the phone.... She was crying for him .....
Nearly 6:48 pm a boy called her it was Reyan.. Oh thank god Reyan reached to the airport. They hug each other, kissed each other .... and "Reyan heard a announcement mencioning that plane which would set for london passengers....Cleaning of his tears from cheek he hold her hand and told to go...Finally Anny set for london ......
Every night Reyan chat with her on fb.... So Anny felt that Reyan was very close to her....
July 16,2014 Anny came india,to her own house. So she decided to go direct Reyan's house so that she could give him a surprise. So she went to his house and asked his aunty where is Reyan... but hearing the news of Reyan's absence she felt like there had no ground below her feet. Reyans aunty told her that-26 july 2011 when he set for last time to meet with Anny he became late so for reaching in airport quickly he increased his bike speed 120 km/houre... and hited by a big truck & spot death.... hearing that she felt like darkness were allaround her... there was no meaning to live...For whome did she live...But wait suddenly she remembered that Reyan was there in the airport that day. Not only that he chat with her till last night. She called her friends but they also told her same... she was crying bitterly coz she got same answer from everyone that Reyan was no more. But how could she unbelieve what she saw in her life- those conversations till last night,and Reyan came that evening to told her good bye. If Reyan really died then who was that guy. There had a lot of questions in her mind but no one to give her corret answer of them. Reaturing home she was thinkting all that. She was puzled like you guys and suddenly becam unconcious. She opend her eyes in city hospital. There was everyone except Reyan. She try to call him but switched off..
After that sudden shock Anny sent to mental hospital for treatment....
:'( :'( :'( hearing that news i cried bitterly... Even i m crying now to tell you guys... why? Haha ... do u know who am i... I am
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Reyan.......!!!!!! :'(