Hiding

Hiding

A Poem by Anonymous
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The reality of our world.

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It used to be an insipid game
One we would do for fun
Teacher thought it kept us tame
God only knows what we've begun

I guess it's been instilled in all of us
That it's okay to run and hide
But if you ask me
We use it as a way to protect our pride

Instead of saying what's truly in our hearts
We hide behind what comforts us
This truly where blasphemy starts

At only age six
We begin this filthy obsession
It starts with the cliques
Which ignites our aggression

By thirteen we are so far gone
Insecurities through the roof 
We lay awake until dawn

You're fifteen before you know it
Feeling more lost than ever
Trying not to quit
Giving your heart to whoever

As years pass 
And your vision of the world becomes narrow
The more and more familiar
That ancient game becomes

You ask yourself "Have I been here before?"
When a younger you comes knocking at your door
Begging you to quit hiding

You are eighty now and full of regret
Wishing you had taken the blinders off years ago
Because nothing has made you more upset
Than the way you were so shallow

As you lay on your death bed
You have one final wish
That the children of tomorrow
Do not have to hide

© 2017 Anonymous


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Not bad at all by no stretch. However I do gripe with the how the rhyme scheme seems to fall apart near the end. It just seems a tad bit odd when the rest of the poem is structured so properly with its rhyme. However, I love the questioning self-doubt motif that is apparent throughout. it seems to push me, as the reader, to think more about my actions that I take and whether not I'm truly happy with my current path and actions.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Anonymous

7 Years Ago

I truly appreciate this and I thank you for your criticism. I'm really hoping that by hearing other .. read more



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You are truly amazing!!! I am in awe of the mature insight in this poem!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anonymous

7 Years Ago

Thank you:)))
Not bad at all by no stretch. However I do gripe with the how the rhyme scheme seems to fall apart near the end. It just seems a tad bit odd when the rest of the poem is structured so properly with its rhyme. However, I love the questioning self-doubt motif that is apparent throughout. it seems to push me, as the reader, to think more about my actions that I take and whether not I'm truly happy with my current path and actions.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anonymous

7 Years Ago

I truly appreciate this and I thank you for your criticism. I'm really hoping that by hearing other .. read more

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Tags: truth, hide, hiding, anger, society, madatsociety, notright, justice, hope, defeat, children, world, people

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A Poem by Anonymous