I am a Creature.

I am a creature whose surrounding made him agile n alert. Raised by the strong hands of solitude n my soul nourished by the mother of darkness,where tears were a source of life.
The stars is where my heart wanted to b,the moonlight shinnin on my face was pure n beautiful,like a conversation with the queens of heaven,that made me feel alive n full of passion.
Cud this b a moment that has gripped my heart with the hands of love,a love greater than human love,a love that is spiritual n that which emanates from the core of my broken soul? Or cud this moment b my last on this sold out planet for gold and exploited for its resources? Cud it b that my heavenly queen is calling at my emotion that is caged in the arteries of the blood that my heart pumps? My lips that mumble pain n a tongue that gives rest to the kingdom of misery wants to b free,so i call,no i shout!!! Take me away make my breath ur prisoner of sweet sensations that pave ways for both sinners n saints. Then our conversation was interrupted,cut short like a success story that dated miss beautiful death! The damn alarm rang,i was so close to being in paradise where the angels always sang and where garments of agony wud b left at the gates to hang! Onelove

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[Coyote Poetry]

" Take me away make my breath ur prisoner of sweet sensations that pave ways for both sinners n saints."
I like the above lines. You are a very good writer. I wanted to read more. You touched on many topics and emotions. I hope to read some longer work. Thank you for sharing the interesting and powerful tale.
Coyote

[unspokenguilt]

wow! That poem was strong...very good.

i hope to read more of your writing