my rebirth

nature's love

parts of my mind
drip from the selling
pouring down the walls.
as multiple colored rain drops,
lyrical vapor roller coaster
fluids out through the flour,
given for tomorrow.
through waves of history
flows within wires and air waves
form past yesterday's
relaying parts of my mind
re shaping refreshing reforming,
linked in nature and bounded with creation.

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

Very beautiful and well written.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Many we experience as we become our true self, it's liberating. Excellent read and write.

[Sami Khalil]

I like how your rebirth is connected with nature and creation...A very good poem...:)

[Michael Soul]

thank you for you time :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Sethnicity]

I like this.. a really condensed retelling of evolution.. and communication. the more I think about it communication is Love!

[Michael Soul]

thank you for you time :)