on Que

on Que the,
stunning morning blue
in view sun and the moon,
grass dripping with dew,
in full glare the loch.
down round there,
some nipping at toe's.

rivers crackling on Que
water in motion.
frozen broken lairs cracked,
eloquently lifting the sound.

beautiful song's infused in the breeze
twittering in full show.
lifelong lover's sing together perched
huddling upon that creaking old fence.
it's rickety gate squeaking
restlessness all on Que.

Reviews

[sharonlee]

Lyric and quite beautiful... inspires tranquility.

[InsanityWriter]

Nice. ^_^ First stanza's my favorite!!

[Michael Soul]

hi thanks for you time to look at my stuff x

[InsanityWriter]

No problem. :)

[astronaut]

you have good imagery

[Michael Soul]

meany more thanks x

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

The cadence of this is very gentle, I find it blends all in an organic kind of verse that resonates. It's high literature and also would translate to spoken word.

[Michael Soul]

thanks for your review on this troth is i don't know what im doing tho lol